This was clever, well-paced, beautifully written, and a joy to read. I love them just going about their business, while we get to hear the footnotes to the ordinary. And the idea of them together, a house...reflecting back...all perfect elements.
And I am a mushpot. I loved this: Home is wherever you are, babe, Starsky thought. And if you wanted to pick up and move somewhere else, I'd be right there with you.
Thank you so much!
Oh, thank you. I'm just thrilled that you liked it and that it worked, I'm always worried that I'm not getting the guys right. I really appreciate your review, it means a lot to me.